Line
Graveyard Ghost
Cute little Strawberry
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Post by Line on Jul 24, 2007 10:27:31 GMT -8
Summary- Jack the Dark Mage? Sally the Cyborg? Oogie the uncouth monk? What happens when TNMBC meets manga.
Disclaimer- I don't own TNMBC.
A/N- All names, except for Dr. Finklestein, Sandy Claws, and Oogie, are the Japanese Names for the characters.
Chapter 1
Jakku's Dillemma
Jakku Sukerinton sat on a hill, gazing at the moon. You know, after a while, Halloween can grow dull. It makes my bones weary.
His demon dog, Zero, ran toward him. "Not now, Zero, I'm thinking."
Meanwhile, Sari gazed at her crush. She was a tall girl with long blond hair, pale skin, and big brown eyes. Her left arm and right leg were pure metal. "I know how you feel, Jakku-sama! I have problems too." She remembered what happened earlier.
"Sari!" Her mad doctor father, Dr. Matsumoto said. "I created you to help me, not poison me!" The short man with the bowl haircut and glasses shook with rage.
"I'm terribly sorry, Doctor," Sari said.
"How dare you disobey me?" Dr. Matsumoto said. "I built you with my own hands!"
"But you can make other creations!" Sari said.
Jakku walked down the hill, which magically uncurled beneath his feet. His white hair blew in the brisk wind, which also disheveled his black kimono. I better take a walk to clear my head. He then, much to Sari's dismay, disappeared into the forest.
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Barrel
Henchman
Opener of the Lament Configuration
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Post by Barrel on Jul 25, 2007 12:44:53 GMT -8
Ooooooh. Interesting.
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Line
Graveyard Ghost
Cute little Strawberry
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Post by Line on Jul 26, 2007 5:46:43 GMT -8
Chapter 2
What Jakku Found
Jakku found himself in a forest. Each door had an odd symbol on the front. Hey, what's this green door? He opened it and was sucked in the vortex.
He landed in a snow-covered village. Temple-like houses and evergreen trees dotted the landscape.Wait a sec! This is what I was looking for. It's beautiful. Look at the children laughing.
A group of children passed him. They were happy.
Jakku looked at the sign. In giant letters it read, "CHRISTMAS TOWN". He then walked away.
"Jakku-sama!" Chocho, a tall two-faced guy said. "Where are you? Halloween's in 364 Days!"
Suddenly the gates opened, and Jakku walked through them.
"Jakku-sama!" A little demon girl said. "Where have you been?"
"I'll tell you all about it in a town meeting!" Jakku said.
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Post by mangaranga on Sept 1, 2007 19:29:08 GMT -8
This is kinda funny, please post more
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