Line
Graveyard Ghost
Cute little Strawberry
Posts: 138
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Post by Line on Jul 18, 2007 10:03:24 GMT -8
Note: All Characters are child versions of their original states, except for LSB.
Little Jack Skellington walked toward an old house. It was raining and he needed shelter, so he entered the house.
Lock was organizing his notebook. "The rules section goes first, then the customs and finally the punishment section! There! All done!"
"Why the heck are you carrying a notebook in the first place?" Barrel said.
"Same way you're carrying a bird cage!" Lock said. "It just was there!"
"Will you two quit arguing?" Shock said. "We have a guest!"
Jack walked through the hallway. "Is anyone home?"
"Yes, dear traveler!" A voice said. "Come into the parlor."
"Okay," Jack said, still shaking. He entered the parlor.
"Welcome, young one!" Three voices said. Lock, Shock and Barrel entered the parlor. "Welcome to our empire!"
"Empire? What Empire?" Jack asked.
"We rule this place!" Barrel said.
"Well, Our Princess does!" Shock said.
"We're only her subordinates!" Lock said. "May we introduce ourselves? I'm Lock, rank: Count."
"Shock, rank: Duchess."
"Barrel, rank: Baron. And you are?"
"Jack! Jack Skellington!" Jack said, shaking with terror.
"Don't worry, we won't hurt you!" Shock said, smiling.
"I hope not!" Jack said.
And So, the first installment ends. I hope Sentinel likes it.
After all, the plot line is her idea.
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jul 18, 2007 19:32:56 GMT -8
I like it!! What is this story about??
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Line
Graveyard Ghost
Cute little Strawberry
Posts: 138
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Post by Line on Jul 19, 2007 5:46:03 GMT -8
It's about Jack going into a mysterious house and finding out the house has a dangerous secret lurkin g in the basement.
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