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Post by Nimrok on Jun 22, 2007 18:44:47 GMT -8
This story is about everyone's favorite (or not so favorite) wolf boy *drum roll* Blaze!
Prologue It was a full moon that night. A werewolf hunter had been tracking a werewolf and now they were locked in an epic combat. Just when the werewolf hunter, Maria, was about to die, clouds covered the moon. The werewolf turned back to human. The hunter and the hunted fell in love.
Then a few years later they had a child. He had red eyes and a wolf's tail. And very sharp claws. His name was Blaze. He grew up in a mansion. Everything was perfect. Till that one day, his 7th birthday, when everything went wrong......................................
That's just the short prologue. More later!
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 22, 2007 18:55:09 GMT -8
I like it! I did not know you liked love...Oh and it is prologue.......But I like it!!! I like how enimies fall in love........
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Post by Nimrok on Jun 23, 2007 9:42:30 GMT -8
Me: Actually, I'm not really into love and stuff. That part was hard to write. And I noticed it was prologue while I was in bed, staring at the ceiling, but......................It was Blaze's fault! Blaze: What?! You're the one writing stuff while you're tired! It's your fault! Me: Shut up, wolf boy! On with the story!
Chapter 1. Happy birthday Blaze!
Blaze ran into his mansion, in the woods. "Mom! Dad! I'm back!" He called.
No answer.
"Are you playing a joke on me again?" The wolf boy asked.
He walked around a corner and saw his dad in werewolf form. Something was wrong. No one turned into a werewolf in the day time.
"Dad?"
The werewolf stepped away and Blaze saw his mom covered in blood.
Blaze gasped. Then his dad turned back to human. He went over to Blaze.
"Listen son, you need to get out of here!" He said.
"Dad, what's going on?" Blaze asked.
"Just leave!" His father sobbed. "Run!"
Blaze turned around and ran out of the mansion. He expected his dad to come out and he would, just not as expected. Blaze heard a gunshot and then a window breaking. He saw his dad fall to the ground.
"No!" Tears started running down Blaze's face. He turned and ran away. Into the woods. Into the city. Into despair. He ran away and never came back. But the pain wasn't over.
Blaze hid in an alley. He waited for the guy to run by, then he opened the wallet he stole.
"$5 Bucks?" Blaze growled.
Then he heard a 'Meow'.
He looked down and saw a cat. Then another cat. And then ten cats. They swarmed on him and pinned him to the floor. Blaze struggled to get.
"Get outta here you stupid cats!!! Grrr!!" Blaze struggled to get out up.
"RRAAWWWW!!!!!"
Blaze saw a strange creature moving towards him. It looked like a cat, except it stood on two legs, was maybe 5 feet tall and it's eyes glowed green.
"No!" Blaze gasped.
The cat thing hissed and reached down to Blaze's chest. It slowly raked its claws where his heart was, leaving a five deep scratches.
"Owch!" Blaze yelped.
The cat thing didn't stop there. It kept scratching away at Blaze's skin, and no matter how much he tried to get free, he couldn't. And strangely no matter how much he yelled for help, no one came.
Blaze didn't know how long it was, but suddenly he noticed a sound.
"Tha-bump tha-bump tha-bump"
Breathing hard, he looked at his chest in horror. There was a hole and he could see his heart beating fast.
Then the cat thing reached in and pulled out his heart. It hurt more than anything he ever felt before. He screamed in pain everything blacking out. And his last thought was: I hate cats!
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 23, 2007 18:14:16 GMT -8
* is crying* His parents died and he has no heart?? *glomps Blaze*
Me: I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! * said this to Blaze*
You don't like romance? I do!!
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Post by Nimrok on Jun 23, 2007 18:31:56 GMT -8
Blaze: I'm not used to being hugged!!!!!! Me: Yup, no heart. That's why it's extremely hard for him to like people. Even a little.
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 23, 2007 18:40:27 GMT -8
Usagi: I still love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sailor Twilight: I don't! Master Oogie! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Usagi: * still hugging Blaze. Tightly* I think I like Blaze more!!
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Post by Nimrok on Jun 25, 2007 16:25:50 GMT -8
Blaze: Too much glomping! Me: Watch out! Blaze's girlfriend might hear you. Blaze: I don't have a girlfriend!!!
Chapter 2. Oogie's new henchwolf
"So, do you have it?" A fat burlap sack asked.
"Yes." A cat monster hissed. The same cat thing that had killed Blaze. "It was as you said, Oogie, too easy."
"Well? Give it to me!" Oogie growled.
The cat thing handed Oogie a box. He looked inside it and smiled.
"Tha-bump tha-bump tha-bump"
"Perfect!" The boogie man said.
"Now," The cat thing said. "Where is my payment? You don't plan on cheating me do you?"
"Of course not." Oogie said. He stepped on a skull shaped button. "You will be payed."
Three slot machines with guns came out.
"BLAM! BLAM! BLAM!"
The cat thing fell to the floor with a thud.
"Ooh, nasty." Oogie said. "Now I just have to find him." He laughed evilly.
Blaze woke up and opened his eyes. He looked around. He was in a dark room.
"Awake, wolfy?" Oogie asked. "Good."
"Who are you, where am I and what do you want?" Blaze said coldly.
"Oh, I'm the Oogie Boogie Man. And I just wanted to give you a rare chance." Oogie said.
"Like what?" Blaze was mad. Though he didn't know why.
"A chance to be my henchman, sort of never grow up and pretty much do whatever you."
"Why would I make a deal with someone I don't know?" Blaze bared his teeth.
"Because you are in a place you don't know. Much more people you don't know. You can only trust me now. I brought you here after your little fight."
Blaze considered this. Not growing up? That sounded fun. And the do whatever you want part sounded even better! "Deal!"
"Good!" Oogie smiled.
"But if you try anything, I'll rip you apart!" Blaze snarled, holding up his claws.
"Don't worry. You won't want to." Oogie turned grabbed something and held it to Blaze. "Put this in the spot where your heart was."
Blaze snatched the object from Oogie. It was a green, glowing, crystal. "How will it stay in?"
"Grrr! Here!" Oogie threw a roll of duct tape at the wolf boy. Where Oogie got duct tape, no one knows.
Blaze put the crystal in the hole in his chest, then he covered it with duct tape. It still glowed faintly, but no one could see it with his shirt on. It made Blaze feel different somehow. Maybe afraid of Oogie?
"And one more thing. Promise you will do everything I say." Oogie said.
"Yes." Blaze said. "I promise to do whatever you say master Oogie." Then he thought a minute. "Wait, how did you know about the fight ?"
"Oh............." Oogie looked around. "Blaze, turn around."
The wolf boy obediently turned around.
"BONK!"
He slumped to the floor.
Oogie laughed. "I knew this frying pan would come in handy one day."
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Shock
Henchman
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[b]I am the Black Mage! I casts the spells that makes the peoples fall down![/b]
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Post by Shock on Jun 25, 2007 16:40:45 GMT -8
^_^ Duct tape fixes EVERYTHING! *Lol-ing at the thought of Oogie with a frying pan*
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Post by *TocaBell* on Jun 25, 2007 16:44:24 GMT -8
o.o I think I love this story.:3 Can't believe I didn't notice it until now!*wants to give Blaze a hug*
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 25, 2007 20:14:06 GMT -8
Usagi: Dude I"M HUGGING BLAZE!! * still hugging Blaze all to tight*
So....Master Oogie....Once me and Night-Night were at an orchestra thing and we were laughing our heads off at the " Master Oogie! NOOOOOOOOO!" we thought it was funny.
"Blaze was not doing so well. He was inthe fetal. " Master Oogie!NOOOOOOOOOOOO!"'
Yes......We will NEVER let it go Blaze....Never will we let it go...........
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Post by Nimrok on Jun 26, 2007 16:45:43 GMT -8
Blaze: I thought you said you loved me! Me: I didn't know it would be this good. This is only my second fanfic. I'm considering posting my other one................
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Henchman
%7C-On the Wings of a Dream-%7C
[b]I am the Black Mage! I casts the spells that makes the peoples fall down![/b]
Posts: 7,954
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Post by Shock on Jun 26, 2007 18:39:29 GMT -8
This is only your SECOND one? Wow, my second one was all in script form! Has anyone told Blaze that Frostkit was killed? By Oogie?
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 27, 2007 12:21:05 GMT -8
Usagi: I do love you! * Hug all to tightly to prove it* But it is not like you love me!
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Post by Nimrok on Jun 30, 2007 13:54:10 GMT -8
Chapter 3. Just when everything was going good...........
Blaze walked towards the Treehouse.
It had been years since he died and made the deal with Oogie. He thought after his parents died he could never be happy again. But right now, he was happy. He had figured out that when Oogie said 'sorta never grow up', it meant Blaze would get a few years older and then stop growing. He had stopped a few years ago. Now he looked about 13. He had also found out where his mom's grave was and that his dad was in Halloween town, but could never remember Blaze. And every day Blaze had to feed Oogie a bug. But, other than that, things were turning out ok.
Blaze stopped outside the treehouse. He heard sounds coming from inside. He jumped through a window and saw three short kids. One was dressed as a devil, another a witch and the last a skeleton. The witch sort of creeped Blaze out.
"What are you doing in my............Treehouse of Coolness!" He said, trying to sound dramatic.
"Your treehouse?" The devil asked.
"This is our treehouse!" The witch said angrily.
"Yeah, Mr. Oogie says so!" The skeleton said.
Blaze growled. "Oh yeah! What if I went and told him! This is my treehouse! Master Oogie says so!"
The witch lunged at Blaze. He ran towards the pipe used to feed Oogie. "I'm gonna tell him!" He jumped through the pipe, and landed in his lair.
"Master Oogie!" Blaze called. "Three midgets took over my treehouse!"
"Those are my new henchmen," Oogie said, stepping out of the shadows. "Lock, Shock and Barrel."
"But I thought I was your henchman." Blaze said, worried.
"You're not needed anymore!" Oogie snarled. "You were a test!"
"Don't I still get to do stuff for you?" Blaze asked.
"Maybe, if I feel like it."
"But where do I go?"
"I don't know and I don't care!" Oogie said angrily.
Blaze clenched his fists remembering what he said when he made the deal.
"But if you try anything, I'll rip you apart!"
Blaze growled. "I'm gonna rip you apart!" ready to pounce on Oogie.
"I don't think so." The Boogie man said calmly.
Suddenly there was a throbbing pain in Blaze's chest. "Aaaahhhh!!!" He grabbed his chest.
"You won't fight me." Oogie said smugly. "You're too weak."
The pain stopped. Blaze looked at Oogie then he jumped back out through the pipe. He ran out of the treehouse, into the graveyard, into the Hinterlands. He kept running, but no matter how much he ran, the pain would follow him. First his parents died, then he died, then everything was perfect, and now he had no home, no one to make him feel like he was needed. He was alone.
Blaze slumped against a tree. He felt like crying, and he did. He sat there for hours till he finally thought:
He's right I'm too weak! But there has to be some way to get better! I will become stronger and faster and whatever it takes, but I will once again be the best!
Blaze got up and started walking. He would be making a trip to the human world.
Epilogue
Blaze looked around from his 'Lair'. A roof top in Halloween town.
It was a few years since he got kicked out of his 'Treehouse of Coolness'. After that he went to the human world and stole weapons and food and anything else he felt like. He now had a new look too. He wore tinted goggles to hide his red eyes, a trench coat to hide his weapons and black boots. He became more violent and had trained himself to be a very good fighter. He had changed alot since his 7th birthday.
"Ooh, victim!" Blaze grabbed a water balloon and threw it at an unsuspecting citizen. "Bull's eye!"
He lived on the roof tops of Halloween town, occasionally annoying Lock, Shock and Barrel, and asking Oogie if he could do something for him. So far no luck. But Blaze would never give up. He would become Oogie's favorite even if it took him the rest of his afterlife.
Blaze laughed at the drenched citizen. "Ha! I'm Blaze the wolf boy!" He layed back and stared st the sky.
And very soon I, Blaze the wolf boy, will once again have everything perfect. He thought. Like being master Oogie's henchman................and having a hot tub...............and a car, which will be a mustang...............and rule Halloween town as Pumpkin Prince............. He continued on and on, sure he would get all this and more.
"And a friend." He said, right before he fell asleep. ______________
Me: So concludes this story! I just wanted to explain Blaze's history, so I made this. Thank you everyone for reading! Blaze: Wait! Are you posting my personal life?!?!?! Me: Hey, isn't that an unguarded ice cream truck? Blaze: Me want ice cream! Me: Go get it! Quick Blaze!
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Post by Sailor Twilight on Jun 30, 2007 14:22:17 GMT -8
Usagi: * Clap* That was a good and sad story! Don't worry Blaze I still love you!! Who will be his friend??? Who? Who?WHO!?
Sailor Twilight: You sound like an owl.
Usagi: Do not!!
Sailor Twilight: You sound like a loser owl.
Usagi: Nimy!!! Blaze!! Sailor twilight is making fun of me!!!!
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