sandycheeks
Graveyard Ghost
BIRTHDAY GIRL- HA! IM 18 YEAH!!!!%\2\%
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Post by sandycheeks on Jun 10, 2007 12:28:11 GMT -8
You Promised
My heart beated slowly as you left me I couldnt breathe nor see where I was going I was dizzy and your song for me played in my head I spun around till i was on the floor hurt and couldnt even said a word you promised, it wasnt your fault i got hurt. please dont leave me I cant stand it its the worst. I cry these tears and they are not of joy my heart burst of pain its like that everytime I hear your name dont leave me dont go I feel torment and burning for my life is empty with out you I cant think nor feel this is to real please dont go you promised I cant stand here alone for my life you are my soul you leave and I die I feel the burning inside just one more thing to say is you promised, so just stay.
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Shock
Henchman
%7C-On the Wings of a Dream-%7C
[b]I am the Black Mage! I casts the spells that makes the peoples fall down![/b]
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Post by Shock on Jun 10, 2007 12:36:58 GMT -8
That was so beautifull! I love it! I'm going to write another songfic before long, so you know! Anyways, that was a really good poem, you should write more! ((On a more serious note, in the begining, it would be 'My heart beat slowly', not beated. Just a little info! ))
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